Erm.......a few things off here.
Well, there were a few things that were a little "iffy" with this movie. You're visuals were ok, none really bothered me too much except for the blue text with the blue background. That made it really hard to read. Second of all, when having speech with main characters, it's kind of tarnishing on their overall character to have them swear. I'm not against it or anything, but it seems out of character with what they would say. Thirdly, your plot seemed kind of out of order. Gate seemed to just kind of come out of nowhere. X said that it was probably one of the easiest bosses he'd ever faced, but then he says "that guy almost killed me" or something. And last of all, Zero died wayyyy to quick. There was only a few seconds of actual fighting. For what the title was, the ending was kind of disapointing. But oh well, I always enjoy a Memaman flash. Just try to work on your plot and creativity and you should do a lot better next time. Keep on practicing.