I'm looking forward to this stories progression.
Excellent way to start off a new series. I liked how you started off introducing your main character through a first-person narrative; it gave me an idea and feeling of just who Matt Jones is in this movie. (Oh, unless it was a coincidence, I caught how you guys molded your names into that one character, pretty cool.) I thought you sound effects were great, they came in at just the right time and were done in just the right way during that attack on the squadron. The only thing I would suggest is a litte more feeling in Matt Jones voice, it felt too much like he was talking and not "thinking". Oh well, things like that are hard to nail down, kudos to you guys for even choosing to put character audio in there in the first place. Oh, before I forget, the pilot who scramed out "15 minutes" or something like that was really cool. It was just like a snap into reality from Matt's mind into all this gunfire and the horror he was going to be placed in. Nice job on scripting that one out. Even though it was a tad short, the overall aspect of this movie was pretty dang good. Keep up the good work, you guys.