Your opening is good, but..
Well, you started this out pretty good. I liked the opening, very nice choice of words. When it got right down the action, it was pretty bland. I'm not talking about just visuals, I mean in terms of plot. It's kind of weird that X and Zero would just meet and decide to due it out. There was also a lot of swearing from the two as well. I'm not against it or anything, it was just out of character with the two. I didn't really understand why Dr. Cain was going to attack X, isn't he his friend? Well, the only games I haven't played are X5 and X6, so I'll just shut up. Anyways, it really wasn't all that bad. I think if you keep up the good work, you'll be making some sweet flashes in no time. I always enjoy a megaman flash, nice work.