It looks a bit off.
Granted your 3d visuals are really nice looking, it doesn't look like the dimension-impared sticks fit into that world very well. When the first stick got shot, it just looked odd after seeing these really cool bullets fly by and then see something that looks like a piece of paper fall to the ground. Sticks don't necessarily have to look that way, some people still use sticks and move them so well they look semi-real. The NG author Jason Noto does that pretty well, I recommend checking out some of his work just to see how he draws and animates them (his style is really basic but he does it really well in my oppinion). The audio was pretty good as well; not a lot of variety, but it did it's job. I encourage you to keep it up, it could really turn out to be something cool.